Sunday, August 30, 2009

Drowning in Blue...

Every time,

I let my love sail through my dreams...

It steers head on to the iceberg,

The impact haunting my nights...

Deserted by love and

Drowning in blue.

P.S. - Drowning in love singing my blues... muffling myself into the quietness...

32 comments:

shiva... said...

make the fonts a bit bigger.
half boil poem;)

Nice da..,

Arun Kumar said...

he he... a comment even before i finish the poem...
wats that half boil ???

tried the bigger fonts da... for some reason they dont apear well.. got tired of it...

Leo said...

beautiful poem Arun! :)

loved it!

shiva... said...

half boil means love failure da . our coll term .

shiva... said...

now font size ok da..

Arun Kumar said...

@leo
thanks man...

@shiva
yes da... after a lotta struggle changed it da... dubba blogger post editor...
he he... yes... i forgot that ... half boil...

Chandler said...

r u in love with a girl who dresses blue n has a blue pair of eyes :D

Arun Kumar said...

@sam
You got that from this poem ??? he he... nope... she rarely dresses blue... n has back eyes...
:P

Rinkly Rimes said...

I suppose drowning in blue is as good as drowning in any other colour! But hitting an iceberg sounds nasty!

spacedlaw said...

Maybe this is a sign that you should start loving icebergs?

Arjun said...

Ok.. this poem makes much more hard for me to believe that u havent gone through it.. :P :P

For the poem... Just lovely..!!

Cheers..!!
Arjun

Amias said...

I have been in this place more than once .. ouch!

Greyscale Territory said...

This is a little like the Love Boat (as per TV series) sub-titled Titanic! Interesting ideas!

gautami tripathy said...

Next time try drowning in red!

:D

weeks trample on each other like magazines

Arun Kumar said...

@everyone
thakns a lot...

@arjun
he he... its just metaphorical dude... 'love strikes an iceberg'....

@amias
more than once...?? ouuuuch....

@greyscale territory
thanks man... exactly what i had in my mind when i wrote this...

@gautami
drown in red... that seems more like a curse...

roshwrites said...

Nice one Arun! Loved the metaphors!

Fiducia said...

Romantic and dreamy..:)
Nice one...!
Keep writing...

SandyCarlson said...

Romantic. And I think even the oldest of lovers could not benefit from night-vision goggles at these times.

Thanks for sharing this at OSI.

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Lovely...it had a wonderful visual impact!

Vita Stunder said...

Beautiful!!!
Your poem went straight to my heart.
Thank you for sharing this.

Anna

Maggie said...

Painful and well said.

Tammie Lee said...

Even though you drown in blue it is so wonderful that you are brave enough to sail ahead! great piece.
Spirithelpers

Arv said...

felt that crash a few times when I was in my teen years :P

nice one bro..

cheers...

The Dark Lord said...

A lovely piece... Sweetly romantic, with beautiful imagery.. A lament on the agony of rejected love...

asit dhal said...

ha ha...in my case...it drowns before it begins 2 ail !!!!!

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Saim said...

Brilliantly expressed!!!

Dr. Chandana Shekar said...

cool one

Vyshu said...

Beautiful ..!

maglomaniac said...

The powerful the head on collision is,powerful is the impact,hence powerful are the haunting nights which mean in turn More powerful love and even increased longing.

I am sorry my baby

~Harsha

~*~ Jal Pari ~*~ said...

Beautiful!!

msatheeshkumar said...

Excellent one bro....