Saturday, May 16, 2009

Fight For Love





I saw them giggling, touching, pushing each other.
She was My angel, My treasure. How dare he...??
I could not stand it anymore.
I'm going to kill that S.O.B with my bare hands.
I got on my feet and paced near them.

Just then the teacher announced "Class... today we are gonna learn about 'fractions'."


P.S - My second attempt at 55 fiction...in a lighter mood..

12 comments:

brocasarea said...

nice....:)

Devilish Angel said...

I didn't get it :(

By the way, do you count SOB as one word or 3? :P

Arun Kumar said...

@broca
thanks man..

@develish angel...

u didn't get it....
all this happened in a 2nd std class room...puppy love...
btw counted sob as a single word only... :-)

perturbed perceiver said...

striking!

btw first time visitor,nice blog!:)

chirag said...

that's very good arun
i also saw your other post and it seems you are a very good writer

yamini meduri said...

hahaha....that ws nice....what did the teacher say when she saw you standing???

Christopher Poshin David said...

I also like develish angel don't get it.......


But still liked it :)


I also like the seminars one......

Cheers

Arun Kumar said...

@pertubed perceiver..

thanks mate...keep on visiting...

@chirag...

thanks man...thanks for visiting too..

Arun Kumar said...

@yamini..

he he..this is jus fiction...me n fighting...long distance...
but its true i had a puppy crush on 2nd std...

@christopher..

its nothing dude..jus the mind of a 2nd std guy....feeling jealous about his crush....

Chandler said...

damn good man. its not a try, full fledged fiction dude. keep coming more.

Arun Kumar said...

@sam

Thanks man..will keep writing..
Thanks for stopping by my blog...

ScarletTd1ar1es said...

barely outta the cradle and in love already. dammit. :P