Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Death Becomes Her


My diary entries:

3 May  09:

She had the most bewitching face i've ever seen...i just couldn't stop staring at her...I desired her...The frenzy begun....The predator form my inside couldn't hide anymore...

She left the club...alone...I stalked her...She didn't even notice my presence...
She paced herself thro the narrow streets....and ...I missed her...didn't have a clue where she went...tried hearing her footsteps in the silent night...couldn't...

The prey gave me the slip....


4 May 09:

Went to the same club...waited for her...waited...waited...she didn't show up....
Got a feeling that she is not gonna make this easy....


5 May 09:

Waited....in vain..
swept thro the streets where i lost her that day...in vain...
Never has a prey made me feel so ineffectual...
I became obsessed...


6,7,8.....13 May 09:

Waited...in vain...

But i couldn't resist....
Her thoughts haunted me...


Today....

I lost my diary...dunno where i kept it....
In the club....my treasure was waiting for me....I smiled...
Waited for her to leave...stalked her...
The weather was damn cold...
she walked thro the same narrow streets....
She paced herself...I think she saw me following her....
And cornered....in the end She really made it too easy...

She turned...She wasn't panicking...her face had no signs of fear...
I knew i can have her at my will...I was going to relish this forever...
I slowly advanced towards her...she didn't even move or shout...she was in a shock..
I came so close to her...
she was pale...couldn't get any paler...she was not even shivering...

She smiled viciously....
Her smile turned to laughter...
I  stepped back a little...Her laughter got loud...
I saw those sharp gleaming incisors by the ridge of her crimson lips...
She said "I'm thirsty"...

  

P.S - Made this post with a lotta ideas n inspiration from Rose...Thank you Rose...had a great evening writing with her....

11 comments:

Saim said...

this was terrifying...stalker gets stalked:D

ganapathy said...

yen da ,,ipadi orae tragedy stories a eluthura... seems u r very much affected by ghost n gal frens ;)

Bala said...

Hey Arun...

Good one...

Ur narration is so great that, as I read, i was able to see the visuals of the happening that u narrate...

Keep writing da...

shiva... said...

mmm... ore vampire dreams thaan pola ??? Nice da .

Arun Kumar said...

@Bala
thanks rajus...will keep writing..


@shiva
thanks da...he he..nope not havin any vamp dreams...

Arun Kumar said...

@saim
the stalker becomes the stalkee..he he..


@Ganapathy
yes da..nowadays not in mood to write romantic stories...been in luv with dark themes...

BlossomBlue said...

Hmmmm vampires i jus love 'em.. Loved ur craving for her :)
Followin ur blog

BlossomBlue said...

Hmmmm vampires i jus love 'em.. Loved ur craving for her :)
Followin ur blog

Arun Kumar said...

@blossom
thanks for stoppin by my blog vasudha...
yeap..love them vamps....

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Aparna said...

nicely written!

vampires have always fascinated me